Comments on: TS1 http://fritzbogott.com/2007/06/04/ts1/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=ts1 Tue, 15 May 2012 11:31:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Fritz Bogott http://fritzbogott.com/2007/06/04/ts1/comment-page-1/#comment-13 Fritz Bogott Thu, 21 Jun 2007 18:52:30 +0000 http://novel-a-month.com/?p=11#comment-13 Yes, that's consistent with the other feedback I've gotten. I'll get it cleaned up for comprehensibility. I'll also be careful to run all work-in-progress through a "is this gibberish?" edit at the very least, before posting. Yes, that’s consistent with the other feedback I’ve gotten. I’ll get it cleaned up for comprehensibility.

I’ll also be careful to run all work-in-progress through a “is this gibberish?” edit at the very least, before posting.

]]> By: Anne http://fritzbogott.com/2007/06/04/ts1/comment-page-1/#comment-12 Anne Tue, 19 Jun 2007 19:59:05 +0000 http://novel-a-month.com/?p=11#comment-12 Read the opening of your troll tale. Very nice. I was a bit confused about the nature of the boat/truck at the very beginning. I was struggling to understand the nature of these vehicles and how they looked. Also, their names are so similar that it is easy to get confused over which one is which. But I'm a bit sleep deprived. It's very enjoyable reading your blog. Take care and happy writing. Read the opening of your troll tale. Very nice. I was a bit confused about the nature of the boat/truck at the very beginning. I was struggling to understand the nature of these vehicles and how they looked. Also, their names are so similar that it is easy to get confused over which one is which. But I’m a bit sleep deprived. It’s very enjoyable reading your blog. Take care and happy writing.

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